Tuesday, August 30, 2005

And Now a Poem

This is one of my early metaphorical poems. Obviously I was very very single at the time.

Inadequate affection
(but sufficient attention)
thrives in my pool.
Where swimmers can float long days
without once touching
the slippery butter slimy floor.

No life saving tubes are by
the edge
discretion and personal skill is all that
frustrates a beginner.
Water wings or not,
my pool is placid, graceful, surprising.

The stability of such a place was
long ago
compromised by monthly passes
separate depth markings,
he and she bathroom stalls,
taller and even taller jumpy boards;
but now can sleep
inert, paralyzed, frozen;

or dance, lively and choppy.

In my pool the gates aren't closed
and the line is not long
the ticket takers booth is as
empty as an orphans hug,
but the water is warm
and the air is sticky and heavy.


If you hate poetry, which I am finding many people do, don't take this one too seriously. If you don't "get it" read it again and think of the emotional rollar coaster of dating and what-have-you when you were seventeen or eighteen years old. There you go.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Here is my metaphorical poem. See if you can guess the meaning.

Broke Asunder
by Rico "The mad poet"

On the sill it did lay;
the packet sit in life decay.
Held in twine, in fragile frail.
From a "get one, buy one" sale.

Held aloft in sudden wonder.
From its still, broke asunder.
Spilt the flow of scrumptious juices,
on the taco lost its uses.

In one bite, its life long losing
all its contents he left oozing.
For one moment, tasteful flavor
all is lost in minute savor.

In the trash bin, last he lay,
life long left in deep dismay.
No grave to mark his fall.
For a taco, gave it all.

My girlfriend's (read:Wife) little secret. Meow!

Susannah said...

I have a TacoBell hot sauce packet taped on my wall. On it is written "When I grow up, I want to be a waerbed."

I'm just sayin'

Meridith said...

Hey, Richard, will you write my next English paper?

Anonymous said...

Um... coming from someone who did an entire paper and presentation on acne (complete with hi res imagery), I don't think you would want me to.

Sweet Emotion Lotion

Anonymous said...

Chopin? Need I say more? I hope you still don't feel this way--all buttery and stuff